So I’ve been doing tons of extensive planning for my novel-to-be, Prodigy, and have been successful with fixing a lot of plot holes. I still have a few unanswered questions that plague me and I’m searching blindly for a plausible answer to them. First off is the reason for the motive of my pseudo-villain, Max. It’s easy to brush off his motives with a simple assumption that “everyone wants power,” but why does Max want it? What aspects of his personality and life has led him to desire power? I’ve tried asking these questions of myself, such as ‘why would I want power?,’ but the problem is that I’m not Max so I would want it for very different reasons. It’s difficult to figure out his reasons, so I’m sort of stuck in that regard. In the early drafts of Prodigy, Max was merely vindictive, but now I’m not so sure that concept accurately sums up his actions and reasons. I’ve got another plot hole to work out, which deals with some sort of worship between characters — the details of which, I cannot say at this time (classified information).
I’ve been making my pseudo-villain a lot more dark and cruel, which would serve to draw readers into the trap of considering him a ‘villain’. Yet Max is not a villain in the traditional sense of the word, unless you are just labeling characters based on personal opinions. For the sake of the story, he isn’t. In fact, I don’t think there are any real villains in the story. Certainly there are a lot of corrupt, self-centered, and violent characters, but for the most part they are considered normal (especially since the city is full of them). With the exception of Max, it seems that he is being treated as a criminal when his actions are not much different than, say, the CEO of Omni Industries who kills off the competition as well as other things (which are classified). And then there is Eight, who is a lot more capable of violence than any of the others, and yet is never considered (by the other characters) as being villainous — maybe towards the end they start to realize the error of their logic, but by then it’s too late.
So I think that the concept of villainy actually is a personal opinion that varies from person to person. A mass murderer might not consider themself a villain, whereas ‘moral’ individuals in society might think otherwise. But these conclusions are not ground in fact, but opinions and laws passed by society. Yet in a society where corruption and corporate espionage (with assassinations of rival companies) are considered normal, then who would they consider villains? So I come to the conclusion that anyone who goes against what we want can be considered a villain. What we want in others varies depending on who you are, so the term could be applied to anyone really. This is why I never liked clear-cut definitions or roles of villain and hero. I preferred anti-heroes because they felt more real to me, and anti-villains who were a lot more difficult to quickly condemn. Max’s actions are justified (well, not in the beginning of the story), but are still quite horrible at least to our standards (and the standards that live only on legal documents in Prodigy‘s society).
Yet the question of why Max ultimately chooses his actions eludes me. Sure he is megalomaniacal and would therefore want as much power as possible, but with the turn of events it makes things harder for him to be merely acting on those desires. He isn’t in the same sort of control he started out with and his life is on the line. Some of his actions are self-defense, but the others aren’t and those are the ones I’m having the most difficulty explaining the reasoning behind. If you were obsessed with power, but on the run from people who want you dead (and can easily kill you) and you had the opportunity to obtain some form of power (not the same type of power as before, but that’s classified*), would you still go for it even if there was a slim chance you could obtain it? Would just the obsession be enough to drive you?
There is a lot more turmoil with this plot hole than I’m willing to divulge, but essentially that’s the gist of it. And note*: by classified, I mean that I can’t discuss any possible spoilers.
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