I have decided to take up writing in E-Prime, which means that I will not use any form of “to be”. That means the following words I will eliminate from my future writing (as best I can): “is”, “was”, “be”, “being”, “been”, and “am”. I must say that this project has proved quite challenging, but not impossible. Writing in E-Prime makes you rethink everything you want to say. The end result usually sounds a lot better than it did in standard English.
Prior to converting to E-Prime, I had trouble editing my class essays. Somehow I find editing someone else’s work easier than editing my own work. So I picked something interesting and experimental such as converting to E-Prime. It forces me to examine my sentences closely and abandon excess words.
For anyone that knows me this sort of behavior comes as no surprise. During high school after one English teacher told me to eliminate the use of contractions from my academic papers, I took it upon myself to eliminate all contractions from my writing. I admit, occasionally I slip up and use a few, but only in blog posts or informal everyday speech. You will never find a contraction in any of my stories. With the exception of character dialogue because I deliberately use them there to make their speech sound natural. If I want a character to sound more intelligent than the other characters (like a scientist or professor), then I also eliminate contractions from their speech.
So far I feel that the incorporation of E-Prime and the elimination of contractions has strengthened my writing. At least it has greatly improved my academic papers. I will look out now for more interesting ways to improve my writing. If anyone has any suggestions, please let me know.
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